Great work with the updated version!
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A lot of the little added things help a lot. I love the extra hint while looking at the journal, and I think that’s just enough to give the player a chance without making it overly easy. The added paint can & boards was a nice touch too.
The bulked up storyline about Luna was great, and I loved the twist about her at the end! The little animation for her jumping into the room is perfect too haha.
I think the whole denouement section at the end is great, and it really gives a nice feel to the finale. The tease at the end about Victor not being the only one is perfect too. I can’t wait to see what you do with the world going forward.
One thing I think could help the finale that little extra bit would be some kind of ‘final shot,’ maybe behind the characters as they look out over the city, with some kind of climactic line. (I’m thinking something like the end of The Fellowship of the Ring, or The Empire Strikes Back, or any movie with a nice juicy cliffhanger.) But as it is I think the game’s ending still works really well, and it gets me excited to see more!
Very glad I was able to be helpful with some suggestions! Will be following with great interest!