Thanks, IGKU!
The book is a WIP, and the layout and text are something I’ll surely revisit. Comments like that help me focus on where to improve. Thanks a lot.
Here's another opinion. I like the layout. It reminds me of Into the Odd. And as someone with reading difficulty, this is much easier for me to digest. I'll pay for extra pages if it means I can read it.
Thanks a lot for your comment, Joey!
I think the white space helps to create focus and gives the layout a more premium look. I’m super glad to know that it resonates with you.