Thank you for commenting at all! I get the sentiment on angles, I can understand where you're coming from. A few people on other forums have said similar things and I mean to take that into more consideration as I work on new scenes.
As for length of a scene, it does take a long time to make a nice, long scene and it IS worth it, but I do only have so much time. One thing that should improve in Chapter 2 will be the time I can spend on each character. Because I will make some sacrifices in volume for the sake of the quality and story.