Left some feedback for you on the game page!
I want to learn more about storytelling; I've been studying it for quite a while now. I admire your passion for writing little stories that leave impacts on people (EXACTLY what I'm trying to do!)
You can try out my game over here if you want, I could use your feedback: https://wasabiiii.itch.io/grass-elemental-demo-demo While the story isn't clear in this early stage of development, it'll make more sense in the full release. Tell me what you think on the game page!
I hope I can learn more from you and other storytellers on itch!