Very nice art style. The only criticism I have is that I think this game would be better with some ambient sound or maybe music playing in the background.
Sidenote:
The English translation looks good from what I read👍
Yes, audio! There should be some music playing when the fantasy stories are progressing. And the music pauses if the fantasy world is disturbed by some "real" work chores, or the fantasy story reaches a death ending...
