I loved this, so so so much. The way you utilized the hud effects and the magic circle scene transformation was so impressive! I was a bit shocked at how actually cruel the protags intrusive thoughts were but in a way it was a bit… I don’t know, refreshing? Like a lot of the times writers will try to either go Way Edgy or Too Soft but these felt like authentic in a way that truly hurt and made me feel for the protag. They deserve the world and this was such a compelling story. Great job!
I'm really glad to hear that The Doubts were written just right! At some point I was wondering if I was being too soft and if I should make it more scathing, but I find the most insidious pieces of doubt that hurt the most are not the ones that are so edgy that you immediately take notice how biting it is. They just happen so plainly yet frequently enough and you only take notice when it's progressed for too long, like you’re the frog just now noticing the water is bubbling and getting hot.
Thank you for the kind words, I’m glad you enjoyed it! :D And yes I agree, Loupe deserves so much.