In terms of length, this was definitely one of the longest games I played (or the game that I played the longest). The game was easy to understand and enjoyable. I haven't played any other visual novel games before - but I was put off slightly by the speaking tones when the character was just saying one word (and more so when there were multiple short responses in a row).
I did have a hard time differentiating between Granny and Grandma - because they are interchangeable terms in my experience - but once I realized they were different people, the story made sense.
Thank you for the comment, Telin! I'm glad the game was enjoyable for you.
I hope you'll play some more visual novels soon, its an excellent medium for storytelling. Perhaps if jHomps and I go back to the game again after the jam, we can make a toggle option to turn off the speaking noises if players wish to do so. I'll also see if there's more of a way to distinguish between Grandma and Granny, I have a few ideas ^^