itch.io

The look of the game is spot on and does what it needs to. Unfortunately, I had a real hard time with the story, which took some strange (to me) turns, or left out information that I wanted to have as a reader/player. The choices presented were limited and while they might have had different outcomes, they didn't seem like they were pivotal to the progression of the story.

Thanks for putting this together - I hope you had a good time working on the project and continue to work on it going forward.

My first selection to review and I was immediately hooked in. Overall, I loved how this flowed, the story, and the choices that felt like there were distinct options (I did not replay to find out how the other options went, but I trust my selections were unique).

The most significant mark is about accessibility. I tried navigating without the mouse throughout the game and that worked fine, but the one area where I would expect keyboard control is most necessary - Preferences - I couldn't get the focus to the options in that screen.

Aside from that, the music in the rap section was a little "off" compared to the rest of the story - though with more of a transition, I could see it working (even some silence for a moment might help).

I love the video style.

Nice work! I look forward to seeing more of your work!

This was a fun and interesting take on the platformer. I don't know what else to say - I fell off the edges of platforms for what appeared to be no reason - requiring a finer tune on controls / sliding than I had access to - but it was fun. I did not play to conclusion for time reasons.

I only had time to play the first level a couple of times (after dying a fair few...) and was reasonably surprised by the challenge until I got the hang of it. After a short while, I did find it was hard for me to keep track of the screen, so I mostly just lucked out to win because I couldn't keep watching all of the movement.

I was pretty impressed by the game and was surprised at how challenging it was (mostly because I died frequently, and that reduced my resources considerably). I like the premise behind it. This was probably my favorite out of the bunch of games I tried, but I didn't have time for all of them.

In terms of length, this was definitely one of the longest games I played (or the game that I played the longest). The game was easy to understand and enjoyable. I haven't played any other visual novel games before - but I was put off slightly by the speaking tones when the character was just saying one word (and more so when there were multiple short responses in a row).

I did have a hard time differentiating between Granny and Grandma - because they are interchangeable terms in my experience - but once I realized they were different people, the story made sense.