Why you should check this out: an quick-read, well laid-out, interesting faction.
Style: a clean, on-brand layout with more generous margins, a5(?) single column pages and some spot symbols / patent style art. It feels very consistent with FIST’s aesthetic.
Structure: there is a good balance of flavour and lore that gives just enough information for a referee to incorporate the faction into their table.
Content: the content is well balanced between the greek inspiration and the ‘bureau of control’ style theme. The writing is flavourful and punchy.
What might I change?
- Content: I’m slightly confused who ‘you’ refers to in the ‘shield bearers’ section