The unusual key signatures add a lot to these tracks for sure. Many of the tracks suffered from needing a little more variation, especially harmonically. However, I enjoyed the murky, frenetic smudge of notes that made up the melody in "reforestation", it gave it a darker character that I think made it the most successful track of the five. Normally I praise the upbeat, high energy tracks of a compo entry, but I think for you specifically, tapping into your darker side might be a good move.
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Thank you for the advice! I do find myself a lot of times falling into chord progressions that loop forever, so it's definitely something i should and do try to work on. With reforestation, i was really trying to go for a mysterious feeling melody, but it would be interesting to try to lean into that darker vibe more with other (new ofc) tracks.