I hear what youre' going for by juxtaposing the two tracks, and I think there's definitely a sort of "gotcha" game where you'd want to keep the horror aspect of the game hidden that the first track would hide. For my part, I would love a bit more variety in the pizzicato strings in the first track, and possibly some kind of foreshadowing for the upcoming horror, but that lends itself better to the sort of game I would want to play, and there are definitely people that want to have a cutesy intro section with no indication it's a horror game underneath, where I think it would work. Overall, I think the second track works better for me, as I love the persistent ticking and thumping and think it generates a strong sense of urgency. Also, as I'm discovering, I'm a sucker for a kind of slightly detuned/chorused tubular bell sound.