I stumbled upon this game and I honestly really enjoyed it! Your art style for this is really unique (love the use of solid, and popping colors for the background, especially during the final rooftop scene. You drew the characters really well too! I really love Lily's design tbh). The story itself is pretty fun to read through, Mr. Law is such a chuuni and he'd honestly be a pretty fun teacher just for his chuuni stories alone LOL. I really feel for him and Mello at the end though (also, I'm a big fan of the flashing scenes of Mr. Law's childhood. It looks really cool). Nice job on the changing title screen as well!
Also, as someone who graduated from a private school, most of the experiences inthat school feels very familiar and nostalgic. So you did a really good job potraying that!
I read your behind-the-scenes post and making a full ren'py game could be pretty tough, I understand. Managing the story, codes, character sprites, BGs, BGMs, and CGs all alone can become really overwhelming, even for a really short game. Taking one step at a time like you did (finishing the script first, then the art, etc) is often a better approach if you're easily overwhelmed (like I am lol). The fact that you finished the story and published the game is something you can be very proud of, so great job and congrats!
Sorry for the really long comment, I like to ramble on and on sometimes. I'm looking forward to see what you'll create in the future! :D