I appreciate that you didn't just create some loops and blast them at us for 3 minutes, there's definitely some compositional consideration being made here and you went places with these tracks. A lot of the entries to this jam have been heavy on timbre and light on composition, while yours is the other way round, I think - the best way to bolster a track like this is to start looking into ways to produce the track more, create a wider variety of tones and explore the space in terms of sound processing, stereo imaging, reverb, panning etc. That stuff is more about knowhow than talent, so imo you've figured out the hard part first.