Beautiful story, and beautiful music. Your orchestration is really well made. I particularly loved Lover's reunion and the Soul theme! By contradiction the Timekeeper theme is a simple ascension of 4 piano notes and it expresses his infinite role quite well.
Try to save thy soul was also really beautiful and touching while reading the story :D.
The return of the Timekeeper theme played by piano and cello let me visualise the fusion of those two beings in a very poetic way. Superb experience :) keep up the work, and congrats!