I like the idea and it's a rather scary one! the thing about Jams that I like the most is when there's a really ususual twist to the theme and you did that masterfully! I'm sure the game was supposed to be really cool)
but the game is really buggy, I've restarted three times but haven't lived through the second day. Are you planing to update the game after jam? I'm curious how it ends, very Papers please like experience, and I do love Papers please :)
but if you are going to update it, please, I beg you, redo the instructios in the folder, they are barely readable and I didn't get what's the stuff on the last pages were about :D