Hello and welcome to Feedback Quest - Visual Novels! This is Hythrain, reporting live with my feedback!
I'm glad I got another chance to play this particular demo. When I played it the last time, I didn't get much time to get through it all. Having now done so, I'm very much enjoying things. There's a lot more choice going on than I remember seeing, and I've noticed flags for those choices which indicate a change in the story ending. This excites me, since this is where visual novels thrive.
I will admit, certain parts of the game bewildered me with how different they felt. The intro sequence and the credits are an example of this. Not saying they're bad, no no. It just became funny how, with all the oddities of Grendel as a character, that having this extra level of wildness just felt appropriate.
I honestly don't have much feedback to give. I can't wait to see more. Though one thing I want to ask: you have multiple titles under the Welcome to Chirchester name. Will the full game be seeing all of these titles mashed into one, or is it intended as multiple games?