First off, just wanna say I love your writing style, it's always paced and worded very well.
*One thing I've noticed is the lack of art, it's almost exclusively real photos, which I'm not sure why. Art would really work well with the fictional characters, like the goblins, jackbunnies etc, aswell as the dog and wolf. Not only would it be better, but it could describe the scene more vividly and accurately as I'm sure there are alot more drawings of goblins than real goblins in this world.
*Secondly, maybe a difference could be added when being defeated or surrendering, as both outcomes act as if you'd been defeated ("Your pathetic attempt saw you overpowered"). Changing that one line in the start would make a small but nice difference, whether it be eager surrender or hopeless surrender.