okay eddy you asked for feedback.. so get ready for a long ass comment. My apologies lol
Firstly you published first in April. Seeing that you aren't a native English speaker.. from someone that also isn't a English speaker but seeing how well, quickly and eloquently this story is, is fucking insane. You are already busy with chapter 4 and as someone that follows aloooot of IFs updates take....forever!!! You are a beast my dude. Especially considering how long your chapters are.
I love the detailed storyline and how each element is vastly goddamn different (i chose spirit and they are a goddamn asshole btw) and the complexity of the characters.
I don't want to spoil too much.. bt our MCs parents are... special.... especially dearest dad. Oh and I would love to know why our uncle is even.. a thing.
You have a encyclopedia that's still expanding with notes and stats which also must take alot of work.
You just did so much!! It's crazy how wonderful you are!
This was sooo good and I was excited just going from chapter to chapter.
My only question is will the other ROs be various genders? Or gender selectable? except for our bestie she's already a girl
I'm so excited to read more into this wonderful world you created. Thank u ♥️