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I enjoyed this one a lot! I thought the premise was imaginative and well-executed. I wish you'd taken advantage of the full word count, though - I think that would have allowed you to work in the theme (and how Grelda felt about her work!) a little more instead of having the title do so much of the thematic lifting.

glad you liked it, I’ll keep that in mind for the next submission. I always feel short and sweet is the best way to go but deffinetly room for improvement