At the moment the gameplay loop feels quite dull. And the text over the parchment is a bit hard to read.
I do like the idea of the gameplay though. I would love to play a game like this with a bit more depth.
Yeah, for some reason I thought I had this morning to work on it too and I was meaning to adjust that a bit for readability.
We do plan to do a post-jam update to spice it up a bit more. Depth and Juice would probably enhance it a bit.