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Very interesting concept for a game. The music is nice and fitting for the title. I also think it's clever, using the edges of the screen as an indictor for how much time's left in the day. Though, my one critique is that I do wish there was some sort of bonus if you submit an actually coherent poem. Not necessarily a pretty or beautiful one, but just one that has a clear and understandable flow. That being said, I do still really enjoy this project. Well done!

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Yes, I get where you are coming from. Honestly, I did want to do more with evaluating the poems, but did not have the time to get that done. I hope to continue to work on this after the Jam voting is over.

Yeah no worries! Please  do continue with the game, I'm looking forward to later versions of it :)