Thank you for the feedback.
1- the MC's name will stick. MC's name is a name of Greek origin and an alternative for Phoenix. Meaning “dark red." All we did is change it from Feenix, to Feenyx. And is still being used in our modern era.
2- In the new rewrite of the story, the MC's clothes at first will be modernized, and he will get new clothes over time.
3- he didn't commit to death, he Wanted to commit to death but got transported. this also had been expanded on in the new rewrite of the story.
4- He won't be attacked very early in the new rewrite.
5- The MC won't stay weak forever, he will learn how to protect himself in the new rewrite
6- his fractured ribs will play a much bigger factor on his health throughout chapter one in the rewrite, combined with fear and confusion due to being in a new world.
overall, I have made the decision to scrap the original script, and rewrite it completely from scratch, and so far, it is looking very promising, and its being proofread. Rest assured, I am making sure the pacing is good, and not rushed at all.