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We are still writing chapter 1, plus I have to rework the sprites and draw the CG's and backgrounds. it'll take a while.

Either way, the new rewritten demo is out, and forget the older build, the new one is much better. Play that.

Exactly XD

No updates for now. But I have finished some of the new sprites for the new rewrite demo we will be releasing. CGS and backgrounds are still not finished, so it'll take time is I can tell you.

We understand what you mean completely. The reason why we are rewriting the whole story from scratch is due to a lot of amounts of feedback we have received. The reason why we are saying to read the feedbacks below and my replies to them is because literally all of the feedbacks are now sounding the same and we made public posts and announcements on Discord, Twitter, and on here that we are listening, and we have decided to rewrite everything from scratch even fix the art. So be patient please, because we are working very hard. Scroll down a bit and see my replies to the criticism. Yours is still valid! But please take the time to read the other feedbacks so you don't say the exact same thing people are complaining about. And please be professional with your reply.

Let me correct myself. Skoll and Hati, not Sol and Mani

I guess I'll spoil a small detail for you. In the new rewrite, we explain why the wolfshire is named like that. Long time ago people who inhabited the wolfshire were people who built this place based on Sol and Mani in Norse mythology, wolf of moon, Mani, and wolf of Sun Sol. moving to present time, it is now in ruins and the werewolves inhabited the place due to the original makers of the place left and vanished. Which that will also be explained later on in the rewritten chapters. Do not expect the rewritten demo to explain everything and lore of the world at once, because if we do that, then you'll come back here and say that the story is rushed again, and the pacing doesn't make sense. At the end of the day, it's a demo, and not everything will be explained in it.

I keep saying again and again that the story is being rewritten from scratch and are fixing the pacing and characters personalities. Scroll down and read my replies from the feedbacks that are similar to yours. The new rewritten demo is being proofread right now, and the pacing and characters are much more polished and better. We have listened to all of your feedbacks and came with the decision to rewrite the whole story from scratch. The MC's fractured ribs play a big factor to the story along with his fear, and confusion being in a world completely different from his, and that will include his health as well, his body will have to adapt to the world. Rest assured, the new rewritten demo and chapter one is looking much better than the old script.

Thank you for the feedback. 

1- the MC's name will stick. MC's name is a name of Greek origin and an alternative for Phoenix. Meaning “dark red." All we did is change it from Feenix, to Feenyx. And is still being used in our modern era.

2- In the new rewrite of the story, the MC's clothes at first will be modernized, and he will get new clothes over time.

3- he didn't commit to death, he Wanted to commit to death but got transported. this also had been expanded on in the new rewrite of the story.

4- He won't be attacked very early in the new rewrite.

5- The MC won't stay weak forever, he will learn how to protect himself in the new rewrite

6- his fractured ribs will play a much bigger factor on his health throughout chapter one in the rewrite, combined with fear and confusion due to being in a new world.

overall, I have made the decision to scrap the original script, and rewrite it completely from scratch, and so far, it is looking very promising, and its being proofread. Rest assured, I am making sure the pacing is good, and not rushed at all.

You are not being disrespectful; your feedback is valid. We decided to scrap the script and rewrite it from scratch and fixing the story and its pacing . and regarding the sprites, I will make changes to them and fix them up to make them more appealing to look at. Thank you so much for your feedback. We are improving as we go. 

MC's name is name of Greek origin and an alternative for Phoenix. Meaning “dark red." All we did is change it from Feenix, to Feenyx.

Thank you for your feedback. We decided to start from the core and from scratch. We are rewriting the story and improving on it. It'll take a long time. But these things happen, and I am sorry for disappointing. I appreciate your feedback and we will do better. I am also redrawing some of the sprites to make them look more appealing to look at.

Don’t get me wrong, this helps a lot. And I thank you for the feedback. We will do our best to deliver a solid story with no rushing happening, and we are also working on fixing the music cutting off randomly, its a coding error which happens very often. The script is also going to get edited and fixed and be proofread. I deeply apologize for this, but know that we will fix this and hopefully come back strong, I’ll also see if I can fix the characters personalities as well. Give us another chance, we are very new to making visual novels, but we are learning and improving as we go. Thank you so much for playing the demo, and I’ll make sure the first chapter will deliver better.

Kevsky.

Can you elaborate more on what you mean by military? because when I think about military, all I think about is green and camo. And which character are you talking about? Feenyx or Bowers?

Yes. The demo is in beta testing now. making sure everything is good and dandy^^