Not bad for your first title! I thought your jump scares were well-timed and fairly fun. I did read the newspaper to get a full grasp on the story, but don't be afraid to show your story rather than tell! This game could have been made a little longer by having the events occur over several nights, where the hero relives those past events through a series of playable nightmares.
Regardless, I'm very impressed for this being your first title. I'm really looking forward to seeing what you'll do in the future! Good luck!