Hi, I love an enthusiastic developer and will follow you for updates on Delilah’s story. You created a really lovely environment and fun characters that made this game stand out.
So, I am not native English speaker myself but know enough that “homecoming” is a term often used to describe an event for former high school students who basically have a reunion. And it’s so common to use the word as such, that any other use is overshadowed by this definition.
Additionally “much movement lately” probably is Delilah asking the taxi driver if the day has been busy. You’d rather say “Busy day” or something like that since “movement” is more tied to actual physical movement (or “a movement” which is more political) and not business, traffic or interactions.
Those were the main things. It was still fine because as a player I still knew what you meant. It’s just the small semantic differences between someone who translates from a different language to English vs. someone who writes and thinks English, not a big deal, really.
PS: Cats are amazing.