Woah! This is awesome work! I got 8/10 pages and got ending 2/2!
You did a lot of things really well in this game! I like how there's underlying lore throughout the whole game. It really helps build a world for your game which is awesome! The only things that I feel could have been better were mainly controls. I personally felt like movement in regards to the way the player is facing would have felt more intuitive. That could just be me though. Overall, super cool game! I love it!