it's really shown that u've put a lot of time and effort in it.
Everything feels smooth as hell, the graphics are stunning!
Having said that, it was kind of hard to read and i couldnt understand what was going on, above that "cinders" word there's a button that you click i dont know what it does, the roll button is clearly a roll but to what ends?
I'm sure this was due to lack of time though, i gave u really good score :)