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As for now, I can not recommend this visual novel. Apparently, from what I've read in the comments, the story is being rewritten. But as of now, as many have said, the story is rushed and the main character gets over stuff pretty fast. We kind of just go between three different locations within the blink of an eye. Not gonna spoil much in case someone wants to read this demo, but the main character finds his phone and instead of calling or messaging anyone, as a normal person would, he decides to show the wolves how it works. And at one point he climbs up and down a ladder with broken ribs... what??? Freshly broken ribs btw. I hope the devs spend more time expanding the story, perhaps add a prologue for mc's background before waking up in the world because they just fly by that like the topic of what he was gonna do before he got to the other world  even though what he was planning was quite serious. If and when the devs post a rewritten story, I'll reevaluate my opinion. But for now, it's just not good.)

Also, as a side note. My own personal opinion about this but calling someplace "Wolfshire" is just weird. You're naming the location after the inhabitants and I know many stories do this but idk, it's like calling a human village "Human Village" Not something to be used as criticism towards the novel, just my personal dislike.

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I guess I'll spoil a small detail for you. In the new rewrite, we explain why the wolfshire is named like that. Long time ago people who inhabited the wolfshire were people who built this place based on Sol and Mani in Norse mythology, wolf of moon, Mani, and wolf of Sun Sol. moving to present time, it is now in ruins and the werewolves inhabited the place due to the original makers of the place left and vanished. Which that will also be explained later on in the rewritten chapters. Do not expect the rewritten demo to explain everything and lore of the world at once, because if we do that, then you'll come back here and say that the story is rushed again, and the pacing doesn't make sense. At the end of the day, it's a demo, and not everything will be explained in it.

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Let me correct myself. Skoll and Hati, not Sol and Mani

That's fine. As I said, it was a personal preference and not part of my review. 

that sounds incredible and would explain the established parallels between Grimm and Earth thus far  o.o