Hey again,
On your game "Not a Lazy Sunday" you don't have comments enabled. So, I reply to this message instead. Hope it reaches you out!
I played the game through! I really liked the atmosphere of the game, the start cinematic and music together put me in a good mood. I like the overall style and feeling of the level / world. Everything functions pretty well and it's easy to move around (didn't get stuck). There's definitely good amount of hours put into this and it feels something you can grow more. The ending and revealing of other levels was nice!
Minimap was a good addition and looked good. An idea: Maybe render player position and heading to the map as well? (could the minimap be rendered in the screen corner always?)
I know it's alpha so you are probably aware of things, but I anyway put down some things I noticed (bugs):
- Start menu colliders (they don't quite match the button image). Small thing, but fixing it would improve the experience.
- End menu cursor is not visible (on WebGL build at least). Maybe same collider size issue as it was super hard to hit the buttons! :)
- Map can have several quest "spots" even the old ones you completed if you e.g. try to do the "same thing" again. Meaning if e.g. interact with the generator after you have talked with the farmer etc.
Some additional ideas (for your consideration):
- Allow camera rotate on Ferris wheel. It could be nice to have a proper pan over the city!
- Quest journal. Allow the current quest with the text to be somewhere so player can revisit. At some point I was a second lost what and why I was going somewhere.
- Slower camera rotation. Allow more relaxed and easier character movement.
Keep up the good work! I am looking forward to see where this game goes!
Cheers, PurpleXYZ