No matter what you do, your game is disqualified as you made it before the jam and is considered cheating. Only if you make an absolutely new game according to the rules of the jam (make a visual novel in an appropriate engine, write it in proper English and DURING September), then it would qualify for the jam. If you need help/ resources, feel free to join the discord server that hosts the jam, you will get better answers/ help than I can provide.
Hi I like your game, but I think next time you should read the rules on the jam page before submitting, as it would save you and the judges a lot of headache. good luck in the future. https://itch.io/jam/spooktober-2023
I don't understand why it's so hard for you to comprehend what is wrong with your entry. In the forums a mod told you you have to work on the game during September, you ignored them and still continue to submit the same game.
But you keep insisting on submitting this game, and every single time, it will be reported and taken down. I'm no longer interested in helping you, I'm leaving this to the mods because it's clear to me that you rather argue with someone than actually make a new game that adheres to the rules. Have the day you deserve ^^