The concept is really cool, and I liked a lot of the level design. The small detail of Keine turning around to face Mokou is also cute. I will admit that I was a bit disappointed with the unlockable lore. The original scene at the start of the game was good, so I would have preferred either reimaginings or original stories rather than retellings. This framing device of unlockable lore seems ripe for expansion, and I hope to see more games like it in the future from you and your team.
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Thank you for your kind feedback! I can understand your opinion about wanting an original story, and I'm glad you liked the opening scene, since I honestly wasn't sure what people were going to think of it. Admittedly I am a huge folklore geek (as well as Touhou of course) so I love opportunities to retell my favourite tales, but I'd like to tell original stories too in the future. Since this was my first game where I actually had time to implement story elements I wanted, I'm happy that I got anything out at all!