Hey! What a nice plot twist you got me there, haha! I did not expect this to happen. Overall, it's a nice story. I can tell you firsthand that it isn't easy to write such a narrative. The graphics and music match so well with the ambiance of the game! Congrats on this epic submission!
Also, I would recommend you to export it as a web source. Sadly, more people will be hesitant to rate if they have to download the game.