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I went so deep, so deep, so deep, so deep that I cannot veliebe what I just played. It has good visuals and sounds, good gameplay and dificultty curve, it has great tutorial, gameplay delivery and an incredible user interface. The game is amazing, you could just prototype it. For me a clear candidate to 1st place.
Hey! What a nice plot twist you got me there, haha! I did not expect this to happen. Overall, it's a nice story. I can tell you firsthand that it isn't easy to write such a narrative. The graphics and music match so well with the ambiance of the game! Congrats on this epic submission!
Also, I would recommend you to export it as a web source. Sadly, more people will be hesitant to rate if they have to download the game.
There you go buddy, great submission!
Here you can try Sinking into Subtances: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-10/rate/2236725
Hello! It was great to try "Echoes of Loss." It's a really nice debut for a first entry, so congrats on that. If you're open to feedback, here are some suggestions:
- I'd love to see the visuals align more with the theme as I progress through the stages of grief. I've heard that the assets are from a pack, but I still encourage you to experiment with color palettes and background storytelling.
- The character movement feels a bit odd; it gets stuck when colliding with walls, and the last section makes the character much faster. I recommend checking out some YouTube tutorials on how to address these issues. There are plenty of helpful ones available.
- Adding some sound and music could make a significant difference. You might want to take a look at Brackeys' Bosca Ceoil tutorial. It's straightforward, and you can create something quickly.
Overall, it's a really promising submission, and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!
Well this comment is not well recieved, it is wonderfully apreciatted!
I think the disclaimer is a must, we dont encourage the use of drugs, thats why we tried to aboid controversy while using "Magic Powder" and "substances" instead of real drug nouns. So Im really happy to read you, as it was the kind of comment I was waiting to confirm myself that I need to add this disclaimer.
Sinking into Substance is a written novel. Due to time restrictions we had to force a one story path. We agree in this point, as it was intended for the developement.
I am really glad me and my team could deriver this project and get this much feedback, it has been the first time I got out the confortzone into a game with backgound and story, not just arcade. It is surprising how much work the narrative and the literary script are.
Thanks again for the feedback @Flo McQ., I will with no doubt check on the resources you provided me! :)