When I realized the shot was getting weaker as the game went on, I had the biggest smile on my face. I had no idea you were such a good writer! I hope you make more story based games in the future!
Visually I also thought the game was pretty much perfect. The 2D Art's incredible, and the 3D Models work really well for the scenes.
In terms of gameplay, I thought the fixed camera was an interesting approach to take the game. While I could mention things I would've improved, I'm also looking at this from a scoping perspective. So with that in mind, I think the only real thing I'd say I would've liked is a 2 hit system instead of a 1 hit system, which I think is fair compensation for the quick reaction times some of the narrow lines have (Also would like to mention I died to the first set of enemies in the first level like 10 times lol).
This has been one of my favorite games from the jam so far. You and your team did a great job!