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Totally forgot this was public today!

When Karen was venting how he didn't bother telling her that he was leaving I was a little surprised MC didn't mention that he did try looking for her but he couldn't find her. Even asked Lady to tell her that but it seems that she didn't pass the message along.

As always, looking forward to the next update! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!


Somethings I noticed:


When MC does the buttery introduction with Miss Reina Izumi thinks how he already knows how to handle her, I assume Zylvana is meant to be thinking that as Izumi doesn't appear to be present

When organizing your team for the soccer match you talk to everyone except Leon so you kinda have to guess where best to put him. Probably intentional since you could pick from process of elimination with all the other introductions but thought I'd mention it just incase.

When the Lord comments on Sigmara leaving he says "obsessiveness and jealousy revolving MC" I think you meant to put involving, though I could be mistaken as revolving does also fit.

When Izumi walks in on Elena and MC and MC says "I did peak at you sometimes..." should be peek

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Yeah some of those are def not intended mistakes. This update was hectic :D. Karen is a stubborn girl all I can say xd. Leon is already kind of known and some hints were given for him so the  Leon thing is okay. In any case I appreciate the feedback I'll fix those issues for the upcoming update :D