I finally finished the demo. The downside is that I played the first version so some of my bug reports are outdated and I was also going to suggest making the UI focus texture a little more noticeable, but I still encountered a couple of issues that haven't been mentioned yet.
However, I must first say that I think the game is quite enthralling as it is and I want to know what happens next in the story, and I guess before too because the passage of time is creative to say the least even if chapters are roughly linear. I think nonlinear narratives are difficult to pull off in video games, especially RPGs where constant progression tends to be a core mechanic so good job there.
I thought the story was going to be more schizo but it's not that hard to follow actually. The focus on hunting and butchering reminds me a little bit of Pathologic, especially because of the surgical tool lying around near the beginning. I bet there's going to be a level made completely out of flesh later.
Besides that the symbolism is done very well. After all that deer imagery and story moments involving deer you get the feeling that other recursive elements will have a similar degree of significance in the future. Perhaps the fish where a little explicit, I'm not sure.
The presentation in general is fantastic so far. The only issues I encountered were some instances of poor collisions and some RPG maker textures showing up such as a regular old fantasy treasure chest in one occasion. Also, I'm certain that a music track is just Nirvana, that was just a song from Nirvana, I mean come on. It broke my immersion a little bit to hear Nirvana out of nowhere, someone please hide grandma's shotgun just in case.
Finally I have a couple of bugs to report. The first one is that I could speak again with Sarah at the Hidden Pool after recruiting her. She shows up for a split second after re-entering the area and I could still interact with invisible Sarah. However, I could neither dismiss her nor get at extra Sarah this way.
Additionally, both Winter and Billy can wear little girl clothes apparently as I realized after acquiring the Farm Girl II. Actually not a bad armor before you get the funeral suit.
Furthermore, using teen Sarah's basic attack against the Warbear consistently crashed the game while other skills did not. I had the traitor card equipped which also seemed to have no effect.
Finally, the final boss of the demo got stuck using the bloodrite shield ability for most of its turns and I won easily by spamming crackerlacker and guarding with every other character in the party. I'm not sure if that's an issue or the AI simply works like that.
Anyways, great game. My prediction is that college will suck because college sucks.