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I wanted to pass on some problems that I have noticed so far that I would like to be corrected and in addition to that, some things I would like, they are:

1°- as I said before, it would be good if you changed the color of the game's text, as there are scenes where the white text mixes with the light and becomes impossible to read (in addition, it would be good if there were also two options, which would be to leave the transparent text box or have a hide button that hides the dialogue or both, I suggested this because I like taking screenshots of some really good scenes and poses you've done in the game);

2°- there are some dialogues in which the characters' names do not match whoever is speaking (example: Agnes is saying something, but Emily's name appears in her lines);

3°- it would be cool to be able to see the characters' affection status and the status of the domination-type characteristics and everything else at the same time;

4°- this last one here I won't charge much because English isn't my native language either, but it would be good to review some dialogues, because sometimes I get confused that Averia is there talking about herself so she should say "I", but she ends up saying "We".

Please don't take my comments the wrong way and if any of them can be done I'll be happy, thanks man, I'm loving your work ^^

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Thanks, I'll take all this into account when I get back to the first part of SC.

Thank you very much^^


Just in case, when you go to the first part, take a look at the second one too, maybe it has similar flaws and so maybe not as much work. Anyway, thank you very much and please don't take any of my comments the wrong way, I just want to help improve this experience for myself and others, your game is really good ^^