I really like this idea! Having a narrative connected to a simple platformer is something I've never seen before, and I think it has a lot of potential. A few specific things I thought would be nice improvements: 1) If you click the screen, I think it returns to the main menu, which was confusing ... or maybe I just found a bug? I was trying to advance the dialogue by clicking ... 2) Longer/better music. That short loop was pretty ear-wormy hahaha. 3) I assumed that the heart was something to collect rather than a platform. Obviously I figured it out, but maybe try another graphic instead. ... Anyway, nice work! Keep it up!