You didnt bother me, in fact, I love hearing criticism because it makes me better. This is my very first work. I am learning as I go and growing with PM. I already have my next project in draft. I apologize, I often have a harsh tone online... but you havent made my upset once, quite the contrary. I appreciate everyone who engages with me and
One criticism a fellow dev had for me was my lack of gallery... for example...
One thing I hint at in Chapter 3 is an ending where you turn on Tacraw and join the Orcanians because its not like Saki and company have been upstanding with you so turnabout is indeed fairplay... and thats a thing I had to cut into Chapter 3.1 was that ending as well... This was suggested by a person on a certain forum... If I see criticism that makes sense, I adjust... :)