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You didnt bother me, in fact, I love hearing criticism because it makes me better. This is my very first work. I am learning as I go and growing with PM. I already have my next project in draft. I apologize, I often have a harsh tone online... but you havent made my upset once, quite the contrary. I appreciate everyone who engages with me and 

One criticism a fellow dev had for me was my lack of gallery... for example...

One thing I hint at in Chapter 3 is an ending where you turn on Tacraw and join the Orcanians because its not like Saki and company have been upstanding with you so turnabout is indeed fairplay... and thats a thing I had to cut into Chapter 3.1 was that ending as well... This was suggested by a person on a certain forum... If I see criticism that makes sense, I adjust... :)

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Oh good. I was kinda getting really anxious and worried that I had bothered you. And yeah, as a .... lapsed... writer, I feel the same about listening to criticism. I also sometimes come off a little harsh. Many times before I've asked for feedback and then when the person suggests something, I'll say something like "no, that wouldn't work," and then the person would be like "what did you ask me for if you won't take any suggestions?", and I'm like "hearing different perspectives is always useful, even if I disagree it helps me think about things in a different." Many times I was able to come up with a really good idea by listening to someone else, even though the idea I came up with was completely different from what they expected.

Anyway, hearing you say this not only relieves my worries but motivates me even more to give you a very detailed analysis with criticisms and suggestions. It won't be very soon, but I'm definitely gonna do it.

Oh, and it really is impressive what you've done as a solo dev making your first game. Seriously, bravo. Keep up the good work, I look forward to what you do in the future.

Thanks for the takes and honesty. I will just keep on keeping on. :)