This was a cute and fun game. It was kind of a slow burn but the dialogue made for some goofy fun and the boss battle was nuts. We really liked the "cheating" menu and the sound effects. "BLAT!" Also, that upbeat music will now be stuck in our heads forever. For things to improve, we'd just say know when to wrap up the talking parts or build in some play to go with the dialogue. Other than that, this was really good for your first "finished" game and we're looking forward to the one you make "for" your daughter! Keep it up Gary The Enchanter!!!