This is pretty good so far. The sex scene wasn't bad but was a bit short and not as detailed as the rating implies - will future ones be more detailed & explicit?
Also, will we be able to choose how dominant or submissive our MC is, and/or if we prefer to top or bottom? I'm playing as a gay male (hopefully dominant top) MC.
I noticed two errors in the game text, too.
* Cassidy says: 'Ummm, making peace with him is still a long short[...]'
- 'short' should be 'shot'.
* Daniel says: 'You could have called take a taxi, Hayden[...]'
- Either 'take' could be omitted, or it could be 'you could have taken a taxi' (not sure which you were going for).
Looking forward to see how this one progresses! :)