I really like the cute art style and graphics! But I just feel the need to mention that the story ... is definitely not as cute and wholesome as the art style. For one thing, the writing could benefit from some editing as there were many grammatical issues, missing punctuation, and poor sentence structure. However, more importantly, the main character smokes and drinks in attempt to fit in (there's no option to avoid it) and ends up fawning for a guy she barely even knows, which just really isn't a message I can agree with and makes her somewhat unlikable as a character for having no self respect imo. She's also hit on by a creep at the bar, which I wish sexual harassment was mentioned in the "warnings" section, as that's kind of a trigger for me personally (I seriously just wish I had been able to punch him at least xD). I really can't stand jerks like that.
Anyway, I hope this doesn't sound too harsh or anything, I just felt the need to comment. Especially since I feel that the look of this one is very misleading imo.