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Hello! I really love this story so far! I’m so addicted to this that I didn’t sleep till 5 am lol. But I want to point out an error which I notice. I’m at the part where the Corbin family came to visit me for the first time. Then at the scene where I go to the maze with Cleias (the companion I choose to go with me is Dimitrie (Hope I spell the names correctly since I’m forgetful). When my character ask hold Dimitrie’s hand he mentioned that his father told him to only hold girls hands. I chose my character to be a girl from the beginning. The same thing happen again when we return from the maze my father called me his son even though I’ve chosen to be a girl. The last error I notice so far is when Dimitrie came to visit me to my room after the adventure with the maze. We talk and there is an error message pop up. I took the screen shots and will upload here. I’m super stoked to continue reading right this moment and the misgendering won’t bother me since I really love the story. ❤️ I hope this screenshots will help. 



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Hey!

Thank you for pointing them out! I fixed the issues. I also plan to revisit the chapters later to improve some of the flow of the text. 

Also, one thing I'm curious about. Was the password to the chest too obvious?

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Hiii and you’re welcome! Glad I could help you 😊 For the password of the chest for me personally it wasn’t obvious. I only tried a couple of times for about maybe about 10 minutes and I thought about giving up. But then I reread the hint again more carefully which made me realize what the answer is and I finally opened it. I felt so dumb when I realize the answer and  it took me a bit long to realize since I’m just slow at solving puzzles/riddles in general. But I believe you did great with the hint. Hope this helps answering your question 👍

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Thanks!

Glad to know it worked out in the end!

You’re welcome! 😄

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Atleast you got it. My dumbass keeps giving up because i just cant figure it out.

Hey, if you're talking about the maze password, the answer is in the hint phrase itself.