The writing is superb, really great. I felt completely immersed in the game, and you showed that graphics are not necessary to make us feel the environment, which is very inspiring for people like me who love creating stories for games. It was a genuinely frightening and tense experience, even though we can replay it, the first time always carries a sense of mystery and constant tension, and you captured that perfectly. I chose all the options because I played it many, many times, and I really enjoyed every detail you included. Background music would greatly enhance the immersion, but that's not a problem because everything works perfectly. Congratulations on the game, I don't have enough words to describe how amazing I found the entire narrative.
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That is so kind of you to say! I really like writing things which create uncanny experiences and contradict themselves in fiction vs realism - spooky coffee was a perfect theme for this!
I really liked your game too, and I think you succeeded in creating a really creepy experience using very few components - the combination of short and simple written and visual clues worked brilliantly.
Thank you so much for the lovely considered feedback!