Wow, such a detailed feedback, thank you so much for playing and for sharing your rich experience!
Unfortunately, I only had about 4 days to work on the project, so I had to leave a lot of things out.
Initially, I planned to give the robot more functionality, which would have justified the perspective switching, but I couldn’t make it happen.
I hope that didn’t affect your experience too much and that, despite this, you still had fun with the game.
Once again, thank you for your kind words!
Thank you so much for playing and for your feedback! I only had 4 days to work on the game, so I couldn’t implement all the features I wanted it to have.
That said, I completely agree with you—right now, the perspective-switching feels a bit limited in its utility.
I would have loved to have more time to bring my ideas to life, but even so, I hope you had fun!
Thank you so much for your kind words, for playing, and for your feedback and suggestions!
Unfortunately, I only had 4 days to work on it, which really limited me in terms of mechanics.
Some of the ideas you suggested were things I had initially thought of, but I couldn’t implement them in time.
However, I’ll be sure to note everything down for this project or future ones. Thank you so much!
I'm extremely happy you enjoyed the game! Thank you so much for playing and for the feedback!
Unfortunately, I got sick during the jam, so I was only able to work on it for about 4 days.
My initial idea was to give the robot a few more functions, but the limited time was my enemy, and I had to simplify things.
If I decide to move forward with the project, I’ll definitely think about adding some cool power-ups. Once again, thank you for your kind words!
Thank you so much for playing and for the feedback! I'm extremely happy you enjoyed it! Unfortunately, I didn’t have enough time to expand the mechanics and add more variety, as I only had 4 days to work on it. But I tried my best to make it fun, and it’s truly gratifying to know I succeeded, even if just a little
What a beautiful story! It was truly a great experience exploring the different points of view.
At first, I really didn’t know what to expect, but I must say it turned out to be a wonderful surprise.
Your art is simple but extremely, extremely consistent. Could you tell me which program you used to create it, please? I really appreciated it—it’s clean and incredibly polished. I’d love to try something similar one day.
The music complemented the story and atmosphere of the game perfectly, giving it a significant level of immersion.
My only suggestion would be regarding the mini-games. While they add great variety to the gameplay and keep it engaging, I felt there was a lack of sensory effects to enhance the overall experience.
To address this, you could add particle effects, or even light screen shakes to create a sense of impact—just subtle enough to avoid discomfort.
Overall, this is a very enjoyable game that left me with a pleasant feeling throughout its gameplay. Congratulations on the project, and I wish you the best of luck!
A truly great level design! I really enjoyed how the progression flows—it’s so natural, fun, and intuitive.
The mechanics were very well implemented, allowing us to get the hang of it quickly without needing excessive text—just through our own experience and learning. Great job!
The sounds and audio effects were also excellently done, blending perfectly with the rest of the game’s aesthetic. Despite the simple art style, everything fit together seamlessly.
The puzzles were well-crafted, fun, and challenging. However, I felt the progression was slightly inconsistent at times, with some later levels being easier than earlier ones.
Another point I think deserves attention is the explanation of how the second character works. While I liked the mechanic, I feel it could be explained better before it becomes frequently used, helping the player feel more familiar with it.
I really enjoyed playing—it was a satisfying challenge to complete. Congratulations on the project, and good luck in the jam!
Wow, the gameplay really caught me by surprise! I wasn’t expecting something like this, and it was a positively surprising experience. I really liked the way we switch perspectives for combat and overcoming obstacles—it was very well done.
I believe additions like a combo system for defeating enemies or a chain effect with multiple consecutive destructions would take the gameplay to an even more satisfying level.
The story presentation was also great! I’ve always loved space themes, and this one was no exception—I absolutely enjoyed it.
Although the difficulty was reasonable, I feel like there could be an extra challenge when switching perspectives. Perhaps something like a shower of small meteors in space?
And since I can see you’re a fellow enthusiast of the universe’s vastness, here’s an idea for a future game (or even for this one): you could draw inspiration from the varied composition of meteors to create interesting effects upon explosion. For instance, clouds of smoke that temporarily blind enemies (causing them to miss their shots), debris flying around that could hit both the player and enemies, and even combustions on small, medium, or large scales, depending on the meteor’s size. I must admit, I used to think ideas like these were a bit illogical, but over time I’ve realized that fun often comes from embracing the craziness! So let’s just use reality as a foundation for everything.
Overall, I really enjoyed the game—it’s immersive, quick to learn, and a lot of fun. Congratulations on the project!
What a satisfying experience! I really enjoyed the game’s atmosphere—it’s calm and lets you think at your own pace, without any pressure or anything like that, creating a cozy and welcoming vibe.
And what can I say about the mechanics? They were incredibly well-thought-out! It doesn’t just bring two perspectives (as I initially thought) but four! That was a plot twist for me since I hadn’t noticed the indicator at the top right away.
That said, I believe there could have been a bit more explanation about how to fully utilize and understand the mechanics. I managed to finish the game by simply trying, failing, and trying again, which I don’t think was the intended approach.
Perhaps adding some gradual levels to showcase how each perspective works would greatly help players grasp and internalize the entire process. But don’t get me wrong—this didn’t significantly detract from the experience. In fact, it highlighted how well you crafted the game. Not everyone can design puzzles that encourage players to rely on their intuition like this. Excellent work!
An engaging mechanic, relaxing music, fun gameplay, and great sound effects. Congratulations on the game, and I wish you the best of luck in the jam!
As a big fan of storytelling, I have to say—what a MAGNIFICENT presentation! The way we’re introduced to your world is incredibly immersive. I can only imagine how much effort it must have taken to prepare all of this, and I truly admire the work you’ve done.
I noticed you used RPG Maker—what a great tool for creating story-driven games, isn’t it? I’ve tried using it a few times myself haha, but I’ve never managed to create something as good as yours.
The atmosphere is really well-crafted. I loved how you used the colors and how perfectly the sound effects fit with what’s happening in the game. This combination creates an amazing sense of engagement.
If I could suggest one thing for future projects, it would be to consider the frequency of random battles while exploring the map. I felt they were a bit too frequent at times, which slightly disrupted the flow, although the battles themselves were fun and enjoyable.
Overall, fantastic work! Congratulations on the project, and I wish you the best of luck in the jam!
I’d say this is a really fun FPS due to its dual mode concept. The contrast between the two modes and how it impacts gameplay added a slightly comedic touch to how everything unfolds.
I’m not entirely sure why, but my game was running extremely fast, which often caused me to fall off platforms even when lightly pressing the movement button. Adding an FPS cap in future projects might be a good idea to prevent this kind of issue (though, as mentioned, I’m not certain if that was the cause).
Stealing the rabbits’ health and then unloading bullets into them was absolutely wild, haha. The music ramping up during these moments was an excellent touch to heighten immersion, along with the well placed sound effects.
Personally, I’d love to see enemies making more use of the environment to their advantage. It wouldn’t need overly complex behavior, just a few strategic elements like taking cover behind walls or even introducing enemy variations that sacrifice themselves to heal others (and of course, we’d be able to steal that health for ourselves).
It was truly a fun experience, and with these final touches, the gameplay would be elevated even further without a doubt.
Congrats on the project, and good luck with the jam!
The art style immediately caught my attention. The pointillism approach is exceptional, and the way you integrated it into the game’s atmosphere is incredible. I also really loved the mix of 2D and 3D elements!
The ambiance perfectly aligns with the game’s concept, and the music added just the right level of immersion to deepen the gameplay experience.
However, it’s noticeable that the difficulty scaling primarily relies on increasing the number of objects to find. While this certainly makes the game more challenging by requiring players to manage more within a limited timeframe, I feel there’s room to expand on the gameplay mechanics.
For instance, you could introduce a puzzle mechanic involving objects that, when altered, affect the color of others, requiring players to interact in the correct order (with visual hints provided in the environment).
Let’s say we have three objects: one white, one yellow, and one red. Altering the first object’s color also changes the second. Changing the second affects the third, and changing the third cycles back to alter the first. Using this system, you could create a sequence of color adjustments that players need to solve to meet the level’s requirements.
I hope this idea makes sense! It might sound a little confusing haha.
Additionally, another suggestion is related to the game’s feel. When changing an object’s color, you could add some smoke particles, a small animation of the object twisting, and a sound effect. This would make the interaction much more satisfying.
One particularly impressive aspect you nailed is the use of larger dots on the walls in your pointillism art. Using smaller dots might have caused dizziness over time with the camera movement (and even affected me personally).
Overall, fantastic work! Congratulations on completing the project, and I wish you the best of luck!
First of all, congratulations on your level design, it’s amazing! The way you managed to connect the two perspectives of the characters in a simple, intuitive, and achievable manner makes the game very enjoyable to keep playing.
Another strong point is how you introduce everything to the player, especially the dangers, which are VERY CLEARLY presented and make it obvious that any mistake near those areas could result in death.
I really liked your art style, it’s pleasant, and the main characters are super cute. The white background with some highlighted elements was also a great choice, as it keeps the player's attention focused on what’s truly important.
I would have loved to have more control over the jump mechanics. For example, the longer you hold the jump button, the higher the jump goes until it reaches its limit, stopping the ascent if you release the key.
I wish there were some extra levels, but I completely understand the time constraints. I also have a feeling the coins were originally intended to serve some other purpose, right? Either way, if you decide to continue working on this project, I wish you the best of luck! It has a lot of potential.
Congrats on the game, it was genuinely fun to play!
Thank you for the feedback! Haha, the character was sitting at a kind of table, but due to the perspective, it’s only visible at the end. I left it implicit that the suit being referenced was in the security room marked on the map, but it seems it was too hidden. I hope it didn’t hinder the experience too much
Haha, welcome to the Game Maker meeting. Thank you so much for the feedback! Initially, I considered reducing the amount of text, as I also felt it might interfere a bit. However, my hands were tired, and I couldn’t fully meet the scene's demands through pure art, so it was the only alternative. I hope it didn’t detract too much from the experience, and I’m glad you enjoyed the scene, thanks for your kind words!
I love themes involving space, and this one was no exception. I absolutely loved the atmosphere and the colors used in the scenery, truly beautiful!
The scene does a great job showcasing the elements that come together to create the story. The camera work and music create a harmony that immerses you in what’s happening
I really wish I could have experienced it through the executable project, but unfortunately, my machine can’t handle something so heavy (it would probably explode haha). Great work with the MP4 format!
One small suggestion I thought of that could add more impact and tension is a zoom-in on the sun moments before the explosion, showing viewers that something abnormal is happening and a catastrophe is imminent
In conclusion, a fantastic scene! I can’t help but wonder what humanity’s fate would be with scarce resources while searching for a habitable planet, no guarantees of a tomorrow (if it even exists, now that the sun is gone)
Simply marvelous aesthetics! It was quite different from what I’m used to seeing, and it was undoubtedly a strong point
The story is clear, and I believe you captured the proposed action feeling very well. I saw that there were many more elements that ended up being cut, right? I would love to see them in a future project
The sounds were really great, truly. Despite the cuts, I’d say it’s a complete scene that does its job very well
The amount of story you managed to fit in such a short time is really impressive! I really liked the interaction between the characters, the dialogues were well written
The setting also pleased me visually, the rain particles added an extra touch of life and dynamism. At one point, a song that I’ve used in a previous game of mine (Another Life) played, and it gave me a huge wave of nostalgia haha, bringing back memories from a few years ago
Considering the time constraints, you did a great job with the story. I just wish there was a slight delay at the end of the dialogues so we could better prepare for the next one, but it's nothing that takes away from the experience
I really loved the concept of the scene, it’s a very creative and tense idea. Playing chess with death, but in such a fast paced way, was a great decision both narratively and in terms of flow
The art style really appealed to me, I love black and white, and it was definitely a great visual choice for my eyes. The music fits well with the scene, along with the sound effects. Truly, a great job!
What a fantastic scene! The artwork is beautifully done and adds an tense atmosphere to the whole experience. In particular, I loved the protagonist’s expressions and movements, especially the last one before meeting his own demise
The way real time rendering was demonstrated was also very well implemented, a great job on that
The music blends perfectly with the rest of the aesthetics, elevating the experience to another level. Without a doubt, a wonderful and incredible piece of work
The way the scene is connected to a potential longer game is truly great, especially considering the context in which everything unfolds
I really liked the animations and the entire process of waiting for the protagonist. The variation in activities makes the scene feel very natural and vivid, without a doubt, excellent work!
The graphics and effects are simply amazing! I really liked the idea behind the scene, it's quite a morbid concept in a way, since, like it or not, time has the power to destroy everything
The premise is very interesting. I would have loved to see more about it, but I totally understand that time is a tricky thing (in every sense, haha)
Looks like someone else here also uses Game Maker haha. I really enjoyed your scene, it has an interesting aesthetic, and I absolutely love black and white designs (which is evident from my history of games and even my own scene).
The concept is intriguing, and I liked how things were executed. It’s true that our perception of time changes a lot when we're immersed in entertainment. I think you did a great job conveying that.
I really enjoyed the atmosphere you created, the graphics have a unique style, which I believe gives the game a solid identity.
In the beginning, it was quite challenging to figure out how to proceed. I think one of the main things missing during the gameplay was clearer guidance on our objective and what we needed to do. Perhaps a short introduction level that introduces the objective and enemies would be enough to give players a general idea of the mechanics.
The music you used fits the atmosphere perfectly, that was another element I really liked.
I also felt a bit of a lack of scene variation, but I completely understand that time constraints likely played a part (my game faced a similar issue).
Lastly, a reset button or even the screen going dark until everything resets would be a great addition to make the game flow more smoothly when you lose.
Overall, great game, nice work, and best of luck in the jam!
The introduction is really great! I loved the atmosphere, and I'm curious about what your full plans for this game would have been if there had been time to finish it.
It’s a pity it’s not completed, but if you plan on posting updates, I'd love to see what's in store.
Since it’s unfinished, I’m not entirely sure how to give constructive feedback, as I can’t fully understand the intended progression from the start of the gameplay to the end.
However, if I may, I strongly recommend that if an HTML version isn’t possible, your Windows executable be in a compressed file so we can just extract and play. Installers can be a bit of a hassle for some players, plus there’s always the chance of antivirus alerts, even if they’re false positives.
The game is incredibly cute and beautiful! The atmosphere and the artwork are very pleasant to look at, and the music really sets a great mood for playing.
Personally, I didn’t quite understand how things worked at first, whether I had to avoid the lights, avoid the humans, or keep the ghost close to the objects.
At first, I was able to modify some of the objects in the environment, but I was avoiding the humans. Then I realized that there was a small amount of a mysterious number missing, so I decided to reset the game and try using the modifications when the human characters were nearby. I thought it would scare them, but it didn’t work. In my final attempt, I used all the possible modifications and finally managed to finish the game! It was fun to see the reactions of both the humans and the ghost at the end.
What would make the game much better is an explanatory tutorial about the mechanics and also smoother movement for the ghost.
However, that didn’t stop me from enjoying your game.
Given the time constraints, it’s completely understandable how much there is to do, but I truly believe you did an excellent job with this. Congratulations on the project!
