- The description is on English but license statement is on Espanol/Spanish? It should on one language
- Link to the license is better than link to the license with chooser reference (?ref=chooser-v1)
- Used wrong image to denote what license is used. It shows
- Cute frog
- I recommend you to add license metadata. Read here how to do it
I am not sure that understood you correctly but if you will use itch's license metadata you should also keep mention in the description.
I also remembered one optional but also useful thing. You can include copy of license to the archive or you can create README file where also place name of the license and link to it...