Thanks for the error checking, I appreciate it.
The sylphs issue is an author skill issue. I was learning literally everything to be learned with this first story, and simply didn't make the best decisions. That resulted in this technical issue. This will, unfortunately, not be fixed without a rewrite of the tooltip system, which I have no plans to do for this story.
Story crafting an IF was also a first for me, which led to the errors with the non-sequiturs and same-ish paragraphs. These will likely not be fixed in the foreseeable future. If you check out my other two stories, you will likely, and unfortunately, see some of the same traits.
I've gone ahead and fixed the second and third issues in my internal build, which also has other minor fixes and spelling corrections.
Should I ever rewrite the story (and I may, as this one is my first), I'll address all these issues.