I can understand feeling nervous because whenever I write stuff, I basically have no faith in myself >.< I often assume what I've written is awful by default, and it's only thanks to the kindness of others that I even have the courage to turn things into games because if not for their support, I'd be too scared to even put my stuff out there. I think you've made a touching tale though, so I hope more people get to experience it :3
Episodic stuff is great! I intended to do that with one of my longer main projects that I started as a standalone story a couple of years ago for Winter VN Jam... but I haven't made much progress because I keep getting distracted by game jams in general xD I swear I'm not addicted to jams, hehe. I hope you manage to make faster progress than I have + that you have a fun and smooth time crafting the larger project :3