I liked Day 1. The world is interesting, the characters are enjoyable and i am looking forward to what is next.
However, i fell like the snarky comments and the use of slurs in some places can really break the immersion. Using them sparingly can enhance certain moments, not drag them down.
Besides that, I liked it.
Thank you so much for reading, and I’m glad you’re looking forward to the next update (which is virtually finished!!)!
Yeah, I’ve had others in the past suggest for me to use less curse words. I’ll double check my usage of them before the next update! I just tend to use them a lot as that’s my own vocabulary in real life (I swear a lot)
