Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!
Yes, this part of the prologue is very to the point. I didn't really stop to think about it, but I went to see the second part that I wrote, and it is more in paragraph format than the released part. I think it's because I had more things to write about, like character descriptions, enviorement and etc. But I'll take a better look at it and try to improve it for the next update!
Thank you very much for your opinion! ♥️